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Some good work here now you have decided what you need to do!

A few suggestions:

• Action plan - Add a sentence at the start to tell me what this is and when you hope to have this all finished by
• Codes and Conventions of Video - Sam - why not add a brief analysis of the Beyonce video you stick on at the end briefly outlining how it fulfills the requirements? This would anchor the theory in an example a bit better, making a stronger point
• Analysis of Representation - why just analyse representation here? Why not start by looking at how it fits the Goodwin model and then moving on to how it represents the star? You need to link this research to your product in every case - why have they chosen to represent the star like this - gratifies target audience, forges a link, allows celebrity voyeurism??? What does your research suggest you will have to think about in your video? These posts need a little more work to focus them.
• Questionnaire - intro sentence please telling me what this is and, after completing answers, some analysis of what they reveal about your own product and how it will be shaped.....

You need then to analyse the genre you have chosen in terms of the look of the star etc, branding and defining the target audience and looking at institutional issues like where your video would be placed and why.....